'Pre-production; Location Recce'

'Pre-production; Voice Over'

'Pre-production; Storyboard'

'Pre-production; Risk Assessment Form'

'Pre-production; Prop List'

'Pre-production; Production Schedule'

'Pre-production; Crew List'

'Pre-production; Cast list'

'Pitch Feedback'

Reflection

The feedback that we had got from our pitch included of ­­­­relevant suggestions, questions and positive comments. The comments we had got from the teacher at (06.25) where all positive as it consisted of; well-chosen cast as well as the use of green screen due to the current weather conditions.

The first improvements we will make towards our advertisement will be on the content as our idea could run over the time of thirty seconds.  Originally we decided that our main character will be on the laptop and wanting to eat Turkish delight as we will show her doing this. However taking our teacher’s comment on board and we will change ‘Simone ‘(cast) to be watching TV as she eats the traditional delight ‘Locum’ with a disgusted expression on her face.  These changes will allow us to meet the target of thirty seconds and the target audience too by use of the television may engage them.

Due to the limitations of improvements we then got asked questions to what we mentioned within our pitch and to elaborate slightly in order to boost our grade. This included of the key message, the (USP) unique selling point, timing of our advertisements shown of TV and what channels and finally how our advert meets the Cadbury ethos.

Overall we have benefited from the feedback given to us by the teachers as we are more able to change and improvement key aspects within our upcoming advertisement to make it as successful as possible as well as being able to engage our target audience as best as possible.

'Chocolate Advertisement Powerpoint'

Turkish Delight:

'Chocolate Advertisement Pitch'